Annotated Bibliography - Comments
The articles you reviewed are done well and clear. Detail is provided in most aspects except in the area of participant description. Ages and grade level were not apparent in some. You mention that measures were not detailed enough in articles. Thanks for all the extra work to find information on measures on the web, etc. Authors often expect readers to look at previous publications for measures used in a current study as they often repeat measures in every article. There were articles with participants and topics with older students. It would have been best to explain the reasons for this. You explained some about this in the past during your seminar facilitation but it should have also been included here. The first reference is not in APA style. There were some grammatical problems in your writing overall.
Your feedback to your peers was exemplary. Your comments were specific and showed that you learned quite a bit and reflected upon others annotated bibliographies.
The articles you reviewed are done well and clear. Detail is provided in most aspects except in the area of participant description. Ages and grade level were not apparent in some. You mention that measures were not detailed enough in articles. Thanks for all the extra work to find information on measures on the web, etc. Authors often expect readers to look at previous publications for measures used in a current study as they often repeat measures in every article. There were articles with participants and topics with older students. It would have been best to explain the reasons for this. You explained some about this in the past during your seminar facilitation but it should have also been included here. The first reference is not in APA style. There were some grammatical problems in your writing overall.
Your feedback to your peers was exemplary. Your comments were specific and showed that you learned quite a bit and reflected upon others annotated bibliographies.
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