ECED 804 Research Paper
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You included a lot of wonderful information and research. However, I think you can work a bit more to integrate the research you discuss. In particular, You had many little sections in the literature review that I think can be considered as one over-arching section. "Working with Immigrant Families". Your discussion of theories utilized in the studies could be more integrated rather than listed within each study description. Be careful about your literature review sounding like study summary after study summary. There is a connection with the literature you reviewed. However, I think the connections in terms of literacy and level of school could be made more clear.
You included a lot of wonderful information and research. However, I think you can work a bit more to integrate the research you discuss. In particular, You had many little sections in the literature review that I think can be considered as one over-arching section. "Working with Immigrant Families". Your discussion of theories utilized in the studies could be more integrated rather than listed within each study description. Be careful about your literature review sounding like study summary after study summary. There is a connection with the literature you reviewed. However, I think the connections in terms of literacy and level of school could be made more clear.